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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71670
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Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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QingYang is my hometown which locate the southwest of Hunan province. It's a large town that have roughly 1 million people living in. The annual worth of farming is greater than that it's manufacturing. Most younger go out for looking job that leave their old parents and children at home. Family reunion only during the work leave of Chinaese New Year. QingYang has clear river and green mountain in the past. The pollution gas and sewage discharge from fatories which makes the river turns black. I always remenber that has swimming in the clear river with father and friends. But now, how dare a man can swimming in the polutioned river. I hope one day , I can swim with fish in the river again.

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