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My hometown is at the south of china,guangdong province with specital beauty.I lived in my hometown for many years,and i love it every much.In my hometown,you can visit the Dayanshan which is one of the most famous interesting place .You can apperciate the nature of the whole city at the top of the hill as well as the fresh air,beautiful flowers. What' more,you can relax yourself through the hiking and enjoy the time with your family. Halfway of the mountain,you can visit the temper named Haipu.Many local peole like praying to have good luck where you can learn more chinese tractional cluture. If you want to taste our local snakes,you can go to the zhongshan road .I think you will have a wonderful trip in my hometown.