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As different countries all over the world have been connected each other in many aspects, more and more foreigners are crazy about China culture. They desire to acquire knowledge of history about our homeland. With the purpose of that, they try their best to get along well with Chinese people and make a great impression on them by communicating on the Internet. To my delight, my foreign friend from America made a decision that he determined to visit my hometown where there are so wonderful places that too many people are long to take a vacation. That he informed me of the news cheered me up. Hardly had I heard it when a large number of ideas hit me. To make it clear, I put all the ideas down using my hand. It will be the first time that he will have arrived there. It is giving him a good time that matters to me. First of all, I tend to show him around the Yellow Crane Tower which is foremost and attractive. It is to WuHan as Great wall is to China. Then, according to how much he is attached to delicious foods, Hubuxiang is a great place, and I think he will be fond of that. There are so many places to visit that I have no idea about how to choose. Maybe I should take into consideration what is essential to him. All of a sudden, it occurred to me that we can go to Huanlegu. Although he has gone to the similar place, nevertheless, he has never gone through what fun playing around the Chinese people is. How time flies! If only he might have more time in China, my plans would be perfecter. I wish I could make him an unforgettable holiday. Look forward to meeting him later.