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As far as l am concered,collecting all kinds of coupons can make us become smart consumers. In my mind,coupons is a helpful way to buy goods.As we known,It is very convenient for us to buy goods.There is no doubt that not only can it save a lot of money,but also it can be good for us . It is obvious that it is safe.when l went shopping with my family last month,we use coupons.What l want to say is that it save 200 dollars.But every coin has two sides.On the one hand,we can drop it becaue it is too small.On the other hand,it is only used in fixed shops. Last but not least,l think that coupons can make us become smart consumers.No matter how it is,it is beneficial to us .
