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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；可适当增加从句和复合句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
I always thinking a question that what's we are living for?What's the meaning of our life? Maby some one have the identical question.It's is hard to anwser because there is no actual anwser.So how to have a meaningful life is a important question that we should concern about. Weather our life is just eating,drinking or sleeping?I suppose that the normal of the meaningful life is depend on different culture,country.For example,the man who are getting starve that the greatest use of life for him is make his family out of poor.For rich man,things are going to change.I think to have a meaningful life is not do something very prominent,like arrive to the moon,but do something that really make others happy. Our life is too short to have enough time to enjoy this world.Don't we have a great use of our precious life?
