小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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i have a good friend,she name is cuiyao ,she is a beatful girl ,we're ereyday play together and go home in the after school ,she like lisste to the miuse ,but i like watch in tv,so that ,we're the best friend ,in the is weeknd ,we're go to the zoo ,our look the many animal ,have a dog cat monky pand ......,we're the very happy ,i hope have a time to the look a moive the next, this is my friend ,my best friend.