小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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i have a good friend,she name is cuiyao,she is a beatful girl,we're ereyday play together and go home in the after school,she like lisste to the miuse,but i like watch in tv,so that,we're the best friend,in the is weeknd,we're go to the zoo,our look the many animal,have a dog cat monky pand ......,we're the very happy,i hope have a time to the look a moive the next, this is my friend ,my best friend.