2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；文章用词太过单一，且单词拼写错误较多；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

In my opinion,the most beautiful city is my hometown.I know that my foreign friend which know in facebook will come to China soon,so,I want to take her to see my schools.Because I think my schools recored my most of life,and I want to share all my sthing with her. From I study in school onwards,I think my small school is the best beautiful school.It was invested more than one billion and the evrimental is so good.It attrach most parents want to send their children to this school.The school has two playgrames and five baskballplaygrames. Finally,I want that my friend will love my school.