一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

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I 'd like to introduce my whole day activities ,I get up at 7:00 every morning ,I eat breakfast at8:00a.m. I do homework from 9:00- 11:00 a.m, including to clean room,floor and tables , I start to cook at 12:00p.m, it took thirty mintures to prepare foods and wash cooking tools , my cooking skill is not very well. I like to study cooking skills and cook different style foods. I have a rest one hour after lunch. I read books from 14:00-16:00 p.m. I do exerice out side from at 16:06-17:00 p.m. I very like to watch TV and cinema , after dinner , some time I go to cinema and see my favourite films ,some time I watch TV such as soap opera . I go to bed at 22:00.