2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

Everyone has various ways to deal with things, which focused on kinds of sides. We can discuss this phenomenon. First of all, it is about the whole. To put all eggs together is easy to protect all of them.We can avoid some unfavorable things to happen.When it occurs, we can take them to secure places quickly, not one by one. Some people have other opinions. They think it is dangerous. All eggs are in one basket, if the basket falls on the earth, you may lose all of them. You may pay the price for your ramdom. Although it spends much time to protect them, but it is worth. In my view, it is not smart to keep all eggs in one basket.