拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Everyone has various ways to deal with things, which focused on kinds of sides. We can discuss this phenomenon. First of all, it is about the whole. To put all eggs together is easy to protect all of them.We can avoid some unfavorable things.When it occurs, we can take them to secure places quickly, not one by one. Some people have other opinions. They suppose it is dangerous. All eggs are in one basket, if the basket falls on the earth, you may lose all of them. You may pay the price for your random. Although it spends much time to protect them, but it is worth. In my view, it is not smart to keep all eggs in one basket.