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拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Everyone has various ways to deal with things, which focused on kinds of sides. We can discuss this phenomenon. First of all, it is about the whole. To put all eggs together is easy to protect all of them, so we can avoid some unfavorable things.When it occurs, we can take them to secure places quickly, not one by one. Some people have other opinions. They suppose it is dangerous. For example, all eggs are in one basket, if the basket falls on the earth, you may lose all of them. You may pay price because of carelessness and random. Although it spends much time to protect them, but it is worth. In my view, it is not smart to keep all eggs in one basket. Not having a kind of preparation, they should have a full plan, in order to prevent something that maybe happen in future.
