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【题目要求】
Some people think that the government should establish free libraries in each town. Others, however, believe that it is a waste of money since the public can use the Internet at home to obtain information. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
【题目讲解】
这回试题难不倒烤鸭。冲突的焦点落在[有必要设立图书馆]或[没有必要]，而不是单一的立场library PK Internet。在家使用因特网的好处太多，可是利用图书馆可以补足其功能complementary。
两个问题。引言3 sentences之后，1. 讨论二者的利弊，看中体的承段6 sentences与转6 sentences段。2. 考生提出看法，看合段的结论3 sentences。
起段引言 Introduction
开头第一句。申论主题：使用因特网可以取得各种资讯Vs.图书馆对大众有利。
开头第二句。集中焦点：冲突是两难自解。
开头第三句。一分为二：分头指引讨论二者利弊。
文章词汇表达做的很好，但单词拼写要认真；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
With the development of internet techniques, many buildings' functions are taken placed by virtual shops. One of them on the discussion board is that whether the establishment of free museums or not when we have the access to the internet.in the following, I would like to indentify the advantages and disadvantages of them and then show my opinion. Some individuals say the it is useless to open free museums in each town due to two main reasons. On one hand, it is wasteful of money and time as we can see those displays on line. Through internet, we donot need to pay for the transportation and wast time to queue. What is more, the government could use the saved money to do other manful things like improving public infrastructure. One the other hand, through the internet, it is possible to access those masterpiece from aboard even staying at home.In other words, those who would like to go museums need to wait until the displays are moved from other places. Generally speaking, surfing internet could save money and time and see more displays. However, the opposite think the necesity of building museums cannot be neglected because of demerits coming with too much using computers and the limited access to internet. Firstly, it is not realistic for little children to spend long time staying in front of comupters. As we know, little kids are active who would like to wandering and exploring their surrondings instead of sitting quiet. So having museum count kids in. what is more, increasing using of internet would inevitable advocate our sedentary lifestyle. Secondly, using computers ibsrptead is not money saving way for individual. For us, we need to pay for the computers, electricity and others, which are not free. Hence, having museums in each town is not bad, which means a short distant and cheap fees. Therefore, establish museums would go with involving more people and be economic for residents. To conclude, it is a good method to surf on internet instead to go museum, as it could come with time and money saving to some extent and could enjoy more masterpiece when you want. However, the existence of museum in each town could be fit for more individuals for tow apparent merits, such as involving kids and reduce the amount spent on internet. From above, I could agree to build free museums in our town.
