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With the economy incresing rapidly,tourism is becoming one of the most promising business market in China.However,the booming tourism industry has raised public concern over the environment.As far as I am concerned,tourism will certainly bring harm to the environment. The answer to this problem involves many factors.On the one hand,a great quanitity of tourists are pouring into one destination in holiday,which gives rise to huge amount of pollution caused by the heavy traffic.Besides public transportation,such as trains and airplanes,also produce exhaust fumes poisoning the air .On the other hand,some vistors do not have strong environment awareness.They throw garbages carelessly in tourist attractions.In addition,offering accommodations to these tourists has also put immense pressure on the local environment. To sum up,in my opinion tourism do bring harm to the environment .Harmony between nature and people is supposed to be achieved .
