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参考词汇：
chat v. 聊天meaningful adj. 有意义的 cheer up 使...快乐
作文开头：
Fellow students, we'll pay a visit to the Old People's House this Sunday morning.
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Fellow students, we'll pay a visit to the Old People's House this Sunday morning. We'll meet at half past eight then and go there by bus. We'll send gifts to the old people on behalf of our class and clean and tidy the rooms for them. We are going to dance, sing, tell stories and chat with them which can make them happy. This activity is very useful, so I hope that all of us can be active. I think it can help us gain more social experience and learn to think about others. At last, I hope we can learn a lot from this activity and have a good time. Thank you.
