江苏省教育厅5月7日公布的2011年学生体质健康调查结果显示,学生近视率仍维持在高位水平,且越来越低龄化。请根据下表所提示的内容,用英语写一篇短文,并发表自己的观点。
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2. 长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等
2. 养成正确的用眼习惯
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70 percent of the students are shortsighted. There are several reasons for this phenomenon. Firstly, students don't have enough sleep. Secondly, they often read books, do their homework and use computer for a long time without a break, which is harmful for their eyes. Eyes are very important for everyone of us, so we should take some measures to protect them.To begin with, we should do eyes exercise and do more physical exercises. In addition, we should develop a good habit of using eyes, for example, taking a break regularly. Besides, I think we should get closer to the nature, then we'll protect our eyes better.