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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40880
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分76.0分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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What you saw or what you heard may no be the truth. If you make a decision just based on them, you may get a totally wrong conclusion. The reason why I think like that is mostly lie in two aspects. Sometimes things just show one of their parts, which may confuses you and leads you to a wrong way.The real truth is lead behind and you should find them out through more investigation and interview.Only if you do more works and investigation, will you get closer to the truth. In addition, things are changing even in a second. Maybe the last moment you saw was just a developing period, things may change as time go by. So in my opinion, we should think and consider our views twice before we draw a conclusion, and with more investigation and information, we will finally get the truth we want.

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