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学术词汇使用较丰富，拼写做的很棒；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
It is unwise to put all eggs into one basket. Once the basket falls down, you may lose all the eggs. The reasons why I consider like that mostly lie in two aspects. Sometimes you put your resource in one place for convenience, while you ignore the accident may happen. You may get the most profile if that was a investment, but you may lose all of your treasures if accident comes down. In addition, it is better and safer to put you investment into different accounts, which makes your risk decreasing to the lowest. Make sure that one basket was lost, the others still work out. In my opinion, we should balance our benefit and the risk their may cause if we invest in the financial market. You will get a stable and safe pay into your account if you arrange the treasures properly.
