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学术词汇需要继续积累，单词拼写不错；句式变化较为明显，可适当增加从句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
It is NanJing that I intend to advise you to visit most.As a economically developed city having a long history,NanJing not only owns advanced economic but also has great and profound Chinese literature. Since NanJing has existed for centuries,there have been many hesitations left from our actors which represent our ancient civilization,such as Sun Yat-sen Mausolem,Tombof emperor ZhuYuanzhang and XuanWu Lake.They are all truly worth your visit and I'm sure you will enjoy yourself so much as to forget to leave there.Meanwhile,being one of several well developed cities in China,NanJing also consists of large shopping malls,beautiful public gardens and various entertainment venues.In addition,serving as the capital of JiangSu Province,a major province of education,it is full of many famous high schools and universities,including NanJing University,Hohai University and NanJing University of Technology. In short,I'm waiting for you.NanJing is waiting for you.
