Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇,也能较准确地使用学术词汇;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Judging from Bureau of Labor Statistics,the result of the Current Population Survey. It is obvious that people having got few education is lower in median weekly earnings and higher in unemployment rate than those of people with high degree in 2011. However,look into the statistics in detail,though the uemployment rate of people having the less than high school diploma,which is the lowest degree,was lower than any other people as well as they got the least median weekly earnings .On the contrary people with professional degree could be most likely to get employed,and they will get the highest salary while they did not achieve the highest degree. In my opinion, education could pay us a bright future,but we do not have to obtain master's degree or higher degrees,which only could help us get a little higher income.