Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
作者在句法层面做的很棒;文中词汇表达用的较灵活,同时能够较恰当地使用学术词汇;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Judging from Bureau of Labor Statistics,the result of the Current Population Survey. It is obvious that people having got poor education is likely to make less money weekly and is higher in unemployment rate than those of people with high degree in 2011. However,look into the statistics in detail,though the uemployment rate of people having the less than high school diploma,which is the lowest degree,was lower than any other people as well as they got the least median weekly earnings .On the contrary people with professional degree could be most likely to get employed,and they will get the highest salary while they did not achieve the highest degree. In my opinion, education could pay us a bright future,but we do not have to obtain master's degree or higher degrees,which only could help us get a little higher income.