2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；很好的运用了从句，但部分句子稍有瑕疵；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

Judging from Bureau of Labor Statistics,the result of the Current Population Survey. It is obvious that people having got poor education is likely to make less money weekly and is higher in unemployment rate than those of people with high degree in 2011. However,look into the statistics in detail,though the unemployment rate of people having the less than high school diploma,which is the minimum degree,was lower than any other people as well as they gained the minimum amount of income.On the contrary people who have acquired professional degree could be most likely to get employed,and they will get the highest salary while they did not achieve the highest degree. In my opinion, getting well educated could brings us a bright future but we do not have to obtain master's degree or higher degrees,which only could help us get a bit better income.