(3).词数:80—100。
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travelling is i shall never forget in my life .it can make us comfortable and feels great through travel.it is very cool means to travel which can make some strangrs by it. it is very relaxing when go traveling.i helpd me lot because it make us see beautiful scenery .it can encouraged us to boden our eyes to see sth different from our own . it brought me lots of pleasure and happy.i will never found boring to do it .as a result ,i would like to enjoy it to do it .