2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦114:My hometown

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i live in the town with peaceful atmosphere in there .it less pollution compared with the other district . it is near the doentown and it will spent 15 minutes to get to there . there is a park in there which lots of people would have a good time and always exercise themselves also some people like to take a lots of photos and eojoy different kinds of nature pictures . it is good for health and a very good activity for people.we will go to there to bresh fresh air and relax ourselves . when w got tired , we would like nto have a rest in there . it now is very popular with everyone .