小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

My friend come from Janapese.She have a son.She is 55 years old.She like go shopping.She like buy some new dress or new skirt.She come back china on 24 july.She can swim and dance.She learn english every morning.She running 1 hour everyday.She like cooking.my friend is a doctor.She has some good friend