题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
作者可适当增加词汇的丰富度,部分句子有错误;希望学术词汇的使用能更熟练一些,还要加强单词拼写的检查;结构不严谨,行文不流畅。
Computer and Man In our around, we often discuss the effect of computer to human. Some think it is benefit to us as computer can sovle many diffcult problme. Anohter think it is bad for us. computer help us in our life. For example, it resovle many imformation.We can get something that we need.Sometime, we have access to canmunicate in different area. In a word, we can't leave the computer. Everything have two sides, with the wide use of computer. More and more children have adciated to computer game. They absent in calss. What's more,human sowly lost the ability of think.We start to BaiDu when we meet problem. So, human should most use of computer's benefit. To making it seceive us to better in our life and working.