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There are an upsurge about certificate.As konwn to us all,It's no doubt that certificate is improtant especially in nowadays.So we can see many people are busy in geting a kinds of certificates there and here. Why do people so crazy about getting certificate?There are some reasons about it.The obvious one is that it is helpful for us to acquire a job.In the 21 century,Certificate play an improtant role in the compete of getting job.However,some people try their best to get certificate just for making them feel more satisfied,they always lack confidence unfortunately.Different form what is said above,a few people are carzy about certificate because that they want to be better.So they study hard and never to stop,One by-product of it is they get possess more and more certificates. In my opinion,we should not study just for certificate but for study.There are too many false certificates,so you have no choice but to study.