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【题目要求】
In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.【题目分析】
注意审题。是teenager而不是college students。Teenagers have jobs，这显然是一个BAD idea。Teenager，意指十几岁的孩子——16岁或者18岁以下(18岁以上就是adult了，16、7的孩子往往被称之为 young adults。参见：[61])。雇用童工(Employing children labor)目前在很多国家是非法(illegal)的。也违反国际儿童保护条约(International Children Act )。允许雇用童工，或存在童工现象，都是一个国家落后愚昧的表现。不要说teenager打工可以锻炼自我，teenager需要的是接受教育，健康成长；不要说teenager打工可以认识社会，teenager还不具备足够的心理承受能力(psychological endurance)，过早步入社会 (early exposure to the real world)，只能导致世界观、价值观(out look of world, value, etc.)的扭曲(deteriorated; distorted)。作者词汇表达比较灵活多变，尤其是学术词汇使用较恰当；文章层次较为清晰；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；请注意分段。
There are numerous reasons accounting for my opinion.I would like to explore three important ones. First and foremost,as teenagers,mentally or physically,they are not fully ready to take part in society.The pressure of society can't be forced to be accepted by teenagers.Because the teenagers have not entirely psychological endurance.If they step into society early,they will be misled by the wrong outlook, outlook on life and values.Fourthermore,some teenagers say that they can learn much from jobs and get much experience for future life.But they neglect this point that their prime task at present is to study. Acquiring much knowledge from school is a guarantee of promising future. Last but not least,companies employing teenagers is an illegal act.The Law formulate clearly that any company is prohibited from using any teenage as an employee.
