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适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
many college students do not have much money, unless they do a part time job or in a rich family. but it does not mean that everyone should pay attention to their money. some of them think be a students, may have a wonderful life nomatter in dress or food . but to me, i think that we should cherry our money but not means to be a man who scrath their money so toughly. for my opioion, there must be two reasons. first is that we have no income,and according to our countries policy, vniversity students be a audlt already. all of our money comes from paratens and they have on duty to afford us to waste money. second is that based on our common life, if we do not lake food and clothes,we should not desire more.if we do that we must lose in money one day. be a wise man please, learn to live well but buy well.
