参考词汇:资源natural resource;节约型社会an energy-saving society
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As we konw, when junior students graduate from school, most of their reference books as well as textbooks are thrown away.However, to build an energy-saving society, we can encourage graduate students to leave thier reference books and textbooks to the students of next grade.The reasons are as follows. Firstly, we can save natural resource and reduce waste by doing this. In addition, the notes in the books are also very useful. Thirdly, it's successful in some foreign countries such as Australia.What's more, it can help students to learn to treasure thier books more.In a word, it's so meaningful that we should take an active part in it.