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初中英语命题作文真题演练(92):为建设节约型社会献一计

发布时间:2014-02-19 17:48浏览次数:1332
要求:
你校学生会办的《英语月报》开展“为建设节约型社会献一计”活动.你提出一个建议:鼓励毕业的学生把参考书以及课本留给下一级的学生使用。
你的理由是:1.可以节省资源,减少浪费;
2.书上的笔记很有用;
 3.国外(如澳大利亚)已有成功的做法;
4.其他。
请你用英语写一篇80词左右的短文向编辑部投稿。
注意:(1)不要逐字逐句翻译。(2)文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。

参考词汇:资源natural resource;节约型社会an energy-saving society


 As we know, when junior students graduate from school, most of their reference books as well as textbooks are thrown away.
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作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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As we know, when junior students graduate from school, most of their reference books as well as textbooks are thrown away.However, to build an energy-saving society, we can encourage graduate students to leave their reference books and textbooks to the students of next grade. The reasons are as follows. Firstly, we can save natural resource and reduce waste by doing this. In addition, the notes in the books are also very useful. Thirdly, it's successful in some foreign countries such as Australia.What's more, it can help students to learn to treasure thier books more. In a word, it's so meaningful that we all should take an active part in it.

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