2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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there are so many beautiful place in my hometown.like some old house which built before one hunder years ago.And I think it is very caltureness and i hope he will like it. Others signs in my hometown is beautiful flowers with colorful.And i aways come here with my best friends.