2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowdays,more and more people love buy something on Internet.Online shopping is become a fashion's way to buy something.Online shoppping has a lot of advanteges,but olso has disadvantages.Such as it doesn't make sure the polity.And the Internet has many fals goods which you don't know. In my view,I think we can buy something online less.Then we should have nice busieness,they can make us have a good emontion in buy sonmthing.