2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；文中有几处错误的句子，部分句子偏简单；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

Hello!I am very pride to tell you some thing about my hometown.Maybe you don't know my know my hometown.So i want you can visit my hometown.Now i will tell you the most interesting place and something about it. When it comes to home,have to mention the hometown culture.Our culture has a history of one hundred years,at the same time we also were revolutionary base.My hometown's name is Yangxin.Our people sacrifice their lives to defend the country .So red is the color of our faith.And we established the martyr Lin Yuanto commemorate their. So i hope you can come here.