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要求:
1.列出大家熟悉的反映家乡变化的喜事,如购新车、住新房、学生免费接受义务教育等
2.列出国内最近发生的一两件大事, 如成功举办奥运、“神舟七号”顺利升空等3. 注意时态
参考词汇
义务教育：compulsory education举办: host 顺利地：smoothly
句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文中词汇表达较为灵活，学术词汇需要加强，单词拼写要认真；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
China is celibrating its 30th anniversary of opening up and economic reform this year. Huge changes have taken place during the past 30 years in every part of China. Great changes can be easily seen in our hometown. Before opening up,most people lived in small old buildings and many students were forced to dropp out because their pareents could not pay the tuition and cars could be rarely seen on the streets.These days, a lot families have cars; people live in huge houses and students are receiving compulsory education without paying the tuition. In the past 30 years, a lot great events took place in China. We hosted 2008 Olympic Game smoothly in Beijing. Shengzhou No.7 aircraft was launched successfully to explore the airspace. As a Chinese, I am very proud of the achievements we have made in the past 30 years.
