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Every family has a TV or even more and most of us spend some time on watching TV everyday. Colorful programs are broadcasted 24 hours day without stopping. News programs provide us the best window to learn the updated current affairs happening at home and abroad; educational programs teach us useful knowledges;entertainment programs helps us relax from stress of study and work. Even TV has a lot benefits, if we spend too much time on it, our eyesight will be hurt and we will not have enough time for our school work.