2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(65):世博会志愿者

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；可将文中的简单句转换为长句或者复杂句；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

Hi Tom, This summer I worked as a volunteer for Shanghai EXPO. It was a hard job but it was also rewarding. First,this job gave me a good chance to practice my oral English and helped me to make big progress. Secondly, working with other volunteers together also helped to build on my team work spirit and sense of responsibility. I am very proud of having this opportunity as a volunteer and I will cherish this memorable experience all the time. Looking forward to receive your reply. Take care. Yours, Li Hua