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字数：200满分：100分
这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子，一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人，一个垂头丧气的说“全完了！”，而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿！”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时，不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面，而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之，一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来，我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难，我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样，我们才能取得成功。
用词灵活多样，也能较灵活地使用一些学术词汇；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
From what is vividly depicted by the cartoon above,we can observe distinctly that just as saving money,the piggy bank is collecting every drop of water falling from the water tap.Most of the people considered water as an unlimited and renewable resource ever before.Actually,water resources is extremely limited and precious.It is fortunate that now the public is starting to pay attention. However,water shortage is still a serious problem threatening the existence and survival of the whole human being nevertheless,the phenomenon of wasting water can still easily be found anywhere in our daily life.For instance,water taps are frequently left on by careless users.Someone even assumes that they have the right to waste water in that they pay for it so that it has nothing to do with others.In fact,so precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it.Water resource is indispensable not only in our daily life but also in the industry and agriculture.And water is the wealth of the mankind,and it is hard to imagine what the world would be like when there is no more water. Even though an increasing number of people have become aware of this emergency,further measures still need to be taken.On the macro level,the whole world should make a joint effort to fight against waste of water.On the micro level,publicizing activities,such as broadcasting wonderful ways on how to save water on TV and other media,should be conducted.To store water means to store happiness and only by saving water can we save a better life for our offspring.
