2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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A Beautiful City in China--Foshan My hometown is Foshan, which is a beautiful and literate city. If you come here, I will go to zumiao with you.This place is a mark of Foshan and you can shopping around there. Do you know Feihong Huang? You can visit his memorial hall and know more about his story. The second interestingplace is qinghuiyuan, Shunde.It is a big garden which is the rich man living here in ancient. There are so many fish and flowers ,you can relax over there. And the famous food in Shunde is shuangpinai. You must taste it when you come here. I hope you can enjoy you trip~