作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用;作者能较熟练地使用较丰富词汇,以及部分学术词汇,单词拼写也要仔细;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
This is my very last year at university, I learn much knowledge as well as other capabilities in the past four years. Obviously, knowledge is not the only thing which is necessay in the society but some soft skills can play more important roles in our life. As for me, there are three main capabilities what i have learned at university are coorporation, learning outside the classroom and confidence. First of all, every individual cannot complete any work without help from others, and as long as we coporate with other people can we get not only help but also get a better result. However, in the future no matter what kind of career we are going to take, cooparation is inevitable. How to ask for advice and how to share the bonas with our collegues are quiet vital and I am glad I have learned it at university. Secondly, as the development of high technology can be so fast nowadays so we can never stop learning. Obviously, we cannot always wait for the teacher to give us the lecture in the classroom, so learn from others, learn from the work and learn from the situation are becoming more and more important. And that is what I have learned from student union. Finally, being confident is not just a qoute but what we have to do. No matter what are we doing, we have to be so confident with ourself that our cient can trust us as well, then we can gain a larger stage to fulfill our dream. University is a spectecular place for us to learn knowledge becaus we would never get a chance to sit down with peers in the same place and listen to what the teacher is saying so we have to cherish this period of time. Any way, we can learn much more than that in this four years, such as cooporation skills, learning by ourselves and being confident which could do so good for our future life.