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As we all know, the university is an important process in our life, which represents that you are an adult leaving your parents and parents to live a new life. Making new friends, taking part in the colorful activities, and learn much professional knowledge all form our university's life. And for me, what I learn from my years at university is that intergrity, conpetence,and interest. First of all, intergrity means that no matter what I do, I always remind myself that keeping good quality is vital in many aspects, when I got along with my friends, I would listen to them talk paiently, and gave my advice when they were in trouble, I could get equal treatment in the same way, which contributes to the fact that I made many interesting friends at university, they are so nice to me no matter what happend. What's more, intergrity is so necessary in the process of learning knowledge and taking exams. According to the reports,there are many colledge students who cheat in the final exams which conducts bad influence. What impress me that I did not disallow the norms of school in the exams, I believe that intergrity is the biggest part in my future life. Secondly, although the improvment I made in high school help me get into university, I always sense that development is deadly needed in people's life, because what you get today is developed by what you worked hard yesterday. Therefore, In my four year's university life, I tried my best to conpetened myself in every aspects so that I can handle different things in my future work. Finally, What I want to mention is the importance of interest, which reflects distinctly in my major in university, I am interested in English when I was a kid, I am obessed with the pronounce and letters of English. Naturally, when I was admitted by the university, I uphold my interest to learn English, which finally prove that I am right to keep the pace of my interest. Besides, I feel so lucky from the bottom of my heart at university because of this special time in my life, what I learned have a lot that can all become my wealth in my future life.