拼写做的很棒,学术词汇可适量增加;注意文中个别的句子错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
First of all, integrity means that no matter what I do, I always remind myself that keeping good quality is vital in many aspects, when I got along with my friends, I would listen to them talk patiently, and gave my advice when they were in trouble, I could get equal treatment in the same way, which contributes to the fact that I made many interesting friends at university, they are so nice to me no matter what happened. What's more, integrity is so necessary in the process of learning knowledge and taking exams. According to the reports, there are many college students who cheat in the final exams which conducts bad influence. What impress me that I did not disallow the norms of school in the exams, I believe that integrity is the biggest part in my future life. Secondly, although the improvement I made in high school help me get into university, I always sense that development is deadly needed in people's life, because what you get today is developed by what you worked hard yesterday. Therefore, in my four year's university life, I tried my best to competed myself in every aspects so that I can handle different things in my future work. Finally, What I want to mention is the importance of interest, which reflects distinctly in my major in university, I am interested in English when I was a kid, I am obsessed with the pronounce and letters of English. Naturally, when I was admitted by the university, I uphold my interest to learn English, which finally prove that I am right to keep the pace of my interest. Besides, I feel so lucky from the bottom of my heart at university because of this special time in my life, what I learned have a lot that can all become my wealth in my future life.