小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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When the first time to school,I make firend with Mike.Mike is a American.He is 18 years old now.He is tall and has blue eyes.He looks so heans.Mike is very firendly.One time I have a fever .Ido not feel good.Mike take me to see a doctor. Mike is also good at study.He always get school.Sometimes he tell me how to do with the hourswork.