2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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hi my name is liumengying .i am happy you can come my hometown .my hometown have many dicious food .i believe you can like .and here have many culture ,ni can hang out.ni can come my home .not go to hotel .so have luck for you.and if you have not understang that you can anwser me .