单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
I have a friend. he is a engineer . he is 26 years old. he likes sports. if have free time he always with me together. we love each other. sometimes he seen likes my brother. he also likes reading. I have a friend like he. I really feel happy.