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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40893
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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文中词汇表达较为丰富,但学术词汇比较少,单词拼写要也加强;能够简单运用一些从句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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upon seeing or hearing something which you don't realise very well, is it wise to make an decision immediately ?maybe it is a bomb in your heart which is dangerous to people all around you,including yourself.as old sayings go:seeing is believing which is equal importance as hearing is believing.it's actually mean ,however ,isn't seeing or hearing is really the truth. it is well known to us all,a loyal dog and his host show an crucil aim to us all.when comes to the story ,the host who is looking care for his little baby has to go out to deal with something much more important.whenever,he couldn't leave his baby alone.an idea pop up to his mind,he brings his best-loved dog beside his little son.backing to his home,to his surprise,seeing his dog and blood are everywhere,no his lovely baby.angrily,he killed his dog.a baby crying came to his ear from the under bed.he found his loved son,but he lost his local dog who saved his baby against with a walf.that is a ture lesson. seeing or hearing is believing,moreover,believing isn't the actually truth that we can simplily realise through the surface.seeing is believe,most often,we can only regard the surface as an evidence to prove an unknown thing.

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