2007年6月英语六级作文真题:学雷锋

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It is not an uncommon social problem that if should a reward when you doing a good deed are especially prevalent in our country. As to this issue,opinions vary form person to person,some people hold that doing a good deed should got reward,because it can contribute to more and more people doing good deeds.But others maintain that doing a deed should not got reward,if we doing every good deed need got reward that those lose doing good deed nature,maybe many people doing good deed in order to got reward rather than you wish doing. As far as I am concerned,doing good deed will make our life more enjoyable,that is to say,doing good deed can add color to the dull routine of every day.In a word,I agree doing a deed should not got a reward