2007年6月英语六级作文真题:学雷锋

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It is not an uncommon social problem that if should a reward when you doing a good deed,it is especially prevalent in our country. As to this issue,opinions vary form person to person,some people hold that doing a good deed should got a reward,because it can contribute to more and more people doing good deeds.But others maintain that doing a deed should not got a reward,if we doing every good deed need got a reward that those lose doing good deed nature,maybe many people doing good deed in order to got a reward rather than you wish doing. As far as I am concerned,doing good deed will make our life more enjoyable,that is to say,doing good deed can add color to the dull routine of every day.In a word,I agree doing a deed should not got a reward.