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My idea of a university arts festival Recently, it is a heatedly discussed topic about our school's art festival which will happen in the next year. People have putfoward various views and suggestions, such as green, environment-friendly, thrifty and creative, etc. As for me, I have many ideas and suggestions, here I just some role points that could make the art festival wonderrful and end with happy joice, so my ideas are followed by the next lists. Firstly, we shoud deal with the most signifcant thing-money. All of us know that the importance of money, everything we do is related with money. So, as this fesitival's organizer, you should think carefully about the spent and the way of acclocating. So, we
