山东济宁邹城一中高一上学期期末英语作文

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When sad life, your friend whether encourage you to go out sad life. Lt' likely that encourage of us are very important in the future,because us have it.As is often the case us often to meet sad thing with frend and we must be encourage to with frend said sorry for you.We have encourage go to do many thing,such as ,the first play basketball or the first go to swimming in the pool.L believe the title statement is valid,because encourage is very good in the life.